Regular Meters, Form Poem Attemp--Like Pilgrims (Modified) --David Z. He

Like Pilgrims
David Z. He
21, January, 2009

This is a modified version of my former poem.
This is an imbic pentemeter poem in Villianelle form.

In Canada we are pilgrims marching
Through the Kingdom of thousand missionaries
Beneath the sand hill the gold is gleaming

Individual position is easing
Become the unitive believers
In Canada we are pilgrims marching

Consciousness and opinions are arising
People of Yellows, darks, with whites and browns
Beneath the sand hill the gold is gleaming

Undertook doubt the future we exploring
Thrill through the bramble survived as fighters
In Canada we are pilgrims marching

Rivers may show puniness to the ocean
Combined, the strength, is the sole harmonies
Beneath the sand pile the gold is gleaming

Oh Canada, absorbing yet diverse
In her we develop with uniques
In Canada we are pilgrims marching
Beneath the sand pile the gold is gleaming